Although families have powerful influence on children, the influence that comes from outside the family plays a bigger part in children's development. To what extent do agree or disagree ?
It is universally accepted that children are affected on their behaviours as well as personality by the family at all time. Meanwhile, others believe, apart from that, that the objective factors are likely to have an impact on children's process too. The following essay aims to discussing and giving my approval for this.
To begin with, it's undeniable to say that families have been the most effective factors that could have their children change or find out their own right principles. In other words, parents usually take responsibility of guaranteeing and guilding thier children to be who they really are in the future. Not only does it have influences on the young characteristic but it also helps them much with being grown up in a good mental status. For example, there're some parents to whom their son or daughter surely look up, as a consequence, the adult are appreciated to be helpful and influential to the later generation.
Another essential point to make is that, in actual fact, the child is able to get influenced on many outside factors despite their parants' education and control. For the most part, it is obvious that the young tend to "cherish" or learn many things in society without thorough classificaton and consideration . Furthermore, there're some special circumstances that are commenced from the general environment where the children were brought up.. Subsequently, it is believed that most of the time, this can cause the young to be negative or able to commit criminal cases. For instance, just witnessing some quarrels could lead them to the violent tendency, or even being lured into antisocial behavior, such as smoking or trading and using drugs, could leave an immediate impact on children's development.
In summary, despite the fact that ti is true that children's process along with to what they are like. However, from my own perspective, i constantly agree with the point that the objective causes, including living environment or some worse experiences itself, are worth noticing when it comes to looking after a child.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there are
...p in a good mental status. For example, therere some parents to whom their son or daugh...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...her essential point to make is that, in actual fact, the child is able to get influenced on...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...thorough classificaton and consideration . Furthermore, therere some special circu...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there are
...icaton and consideration . Furthermore, therere some special circumstances that are com...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nment where the children were brought up.. Subsequently, it is believed that most ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1209439528 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90908968032 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0276163836 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200799261127 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623999919534 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442423371547 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117882975476 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202935832841 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there are
...p in a good mental status. For example, therere some parents to whom their son or daugh...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...her essential point to make is that, in actual fact, the child is able to get influenced on...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...thorough classificaton and consideration . Furthermore, therere some special circu...
^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there are
...icaton and consideration . Furthermore, therere some special circumstances that are com...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nment where the children were brought up.. Subsequently, it is believed that most ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1209439528 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90908968032 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0276163836 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200799261127 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623999919534 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442423371547 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117882975476 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202935832841 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.