Many young people change their jobs and careers every few years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, there are more and more young people change their workplaces to another in each of certain period of time. Some suppose the statement to be negative in many respects and I heavily agree with the point that this tendency has more drawbacks than its benefits. The following essay'll discuss my explanation as well as personal perspective of this one.
To commence with, the major factor of this issue comes from the wrong direction when they're just a child. In other words, Students who are not able to make a decision for their educational prefessor or a particular field to learn when going to the university in the future, tend to live their fortcoming lifes ambitiousless, by that means, some individuals would rather apply for another job due to the lack of interests the former bringing along Furthermore, the growing phenomenon is also because of a harsh reality of their living standards, for instance, once they're in need to pay off more for cost of living, including the taxes on water and energy comsumption or the health insurance.
In addition, it is apparently obvious that the phenomenon definitely has various negative impacts on the general public. The shortage of labouring force due to many young people's,to a large extent, increasing demand for changing to new careers can cause to the decline of some organizations and firms. This is partly because a company can be suffered from several effects by the sudden retirement of workers , for instance, on its own the decrease of economy and productivity. Another point to make is that it is likely to have the unemployment occured if there are too many applicants for a same position.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the trend may be originated from some objective reasons likes the demand for finding out a more productive work environment, for the most part, it depends on the young's wishes and ambition. From my point of view, i constantly believe that this case is significantly disadvantageous.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...orkplaces to another in each of certain period of time. Some suppose the statement to be negat...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...sue comes from the wrong direction when theyre just a child. In other words, Students ...
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Line 2, column 564, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ir living standards, for instance, once theyre in need to pay off more for cost of liv...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ely has various negative impacts on the general public. The shortage of labouring force due to...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...abouring force due to many young peoples,to a large extent, increasing demand for c...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ects by the sudden retirement of workers , for instance, on its own the decrease o...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... case is significantly disadvantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94925373134 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83875531634 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.074667738 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.727272727 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255189259578 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879800443445 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453754300631 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148599605546 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308510351547 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...orkplaces to another in each of certain period of time. Some suppose the statement to be negat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...sue comes from the wrong direction when theyre just a child. In other words, Students ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 564, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ir living standards, for instance, once theyre in need to pay off more for cost of liv...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ely has various negative impacts on the general public. The shortage of labouring force due to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...abouring force due to many young peoples,to a large extent, increasing demand for c...
^^^
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ects by the sudden retirement of workers , for instance, on its own the decrease o...
^^
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... case is significantly disadvantageous.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94925373134 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83875531634 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591044776119 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.074667738 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.727272727 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255189259578 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879800443445 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453754300631 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148599605546 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308510351547 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.