Many people argue that printed newspapers will remain the most crucial source of information despite the increasing number of online newsreaders. I totally agree with this statement as internet-based newspapers might give their readers its faster updated and interesting reading experience.
First and foremost, online newspapers may enable individuals to get updated quickly. More specifically, digital newspapers provide their readers with the up-to-the-minute information about current affairs which happens locally and globally, allowing them to obtain news in a matter of minutes. For example, the news about infectiousness rates, COVID19 pandemic, the ways of protection and prevention from this epidemic were updated instantly and constantly during the COVID19 pandemic. By contrary, those who reading printed newspapers have to wait at least one day or even several days due to the long process of editing and publishing.
Moreover, internet-based newspapers enhance individuals’ reading experience. This is because the constant advancements of the technology allow internet users to enjoy recording audios and vivid videos, whole newsreaders can only experience boring printed texts on conventional ones. As a result, online newsreaders might feel more engaged in obtaining news and easily visualize these events mentioned that cannot be fulfilled by traditional newspapers. For instance, the news about the release of a new smart phone model on the internet enables individuals to visualize more easily about its features and functions and analyze pubic feedbacks before making a purchasing decision.
In conclusion, I believe that digital newspapers would be superseded conventional ones due to its abilities to get updated quickly and superior reading experience. Give the likelihood the more, but not less popular in the future, the government should take actions to enhance cybersecurity to ensure accuracy of the news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
... its features and functions and analyze pubic feedbacks before making a purchasing de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83450704225 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09153124894 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.595600568 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.083333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274473569292 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902731817989 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498426883035 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158406651086 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040629662673 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.