Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
Nowadays, the Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as best place to find information about what is happening in the world. I believe that the Internet is gradually becoming the most popular source of news.
On the one hand, the newspapers will continue to be an essential base of news, even in the Internet age. Firstly, not everyone who lives in rural areas wants to or is able to use the Internet due to lack of the ability of opportunity to get online, while many of us prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access. Secondly, the newspapers are more reliable than online news because they employ professional journalists and editors. Finally, many people prefer experience holding and reading a paper rather than looking at computer screen.
On the other hand, the Internet can be as popular as newspapers for a variety of reasons. The main reason is that we can find any news that we search at any time and wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices. One of the reasons is that online news compared to newspapers is the ability to share articles, discuss them with other people, give our views, and even contribute with our own updates on social media. Moreover, an explosion is being observed on social networks like YouTube and Twitter that anyone can share their news and views. A final point is that the source of online news is less damaging to the environment.
In conclusion, I disagree with this opinion that the newspapers will remain to be a vital source of information, because I believe that the Internet will soon be the main source of news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75724637681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58597949723 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5573536335 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368134823051 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130520308104 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800023931379 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222902676169 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464771956692 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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