The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart describes the inspection results of people in 5 cities in Australia on their coffee and tea purchasing or drinking habits in last 4 weeks.
In Melbourne and Hobart, an almost equal number of people went to cafes for tea or coffee (63-64%). But the amount of people who buy instant coffee is not the same. 48% in Melbourne and almost 55% in Hobart. People who buy fresh coffee make up 47% of Melbourne’s population and almost 40% of Hobart’s population. In Brisbane and Adelaide, people who buy fresh coffee make up 35% of the population. The percentage of people who drink instant coffee varies in these cities. 53% in Brisbane while 50% in Adeleide. 55% of people go to a cafe for coffee or tea in Brisbane and 50% in Adelaide. As for Sydney, while more than 60% of the population in this city goes to cafes, the percentage of people who buy fresh coffee or instant coffee is almost the same (43-45%).
According to the data, in the above 5 Australian cities, in the last 4 weeks, the majority of the population went to the cafe, and the least number of people bought fresh coffee.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5303030303 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51809591964 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464646464646 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2047187315 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199392349562 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901044332877 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767055428594 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168787857097 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101171245839 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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