Although parents are responsible for raising a child, outside influence plays a key role. in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The significance of child development which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. However, Father and mother have a particular duty to grow a baby but outdoor activities are also crucial part for their improvement. I completely agree with this statement because indoor and outdoor facilities both are important for children's brain development. This essay will elaborate attributing to this trend in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays many parents are unable to go outside with children because their busy life. For that reason, most of the children depend on indoor such as video games, using smart games phone, watching videos on YouTube and they are facing some problems by obesity. Moreover, if children have a chance. go outside, they will keep fit by doing many sports. For instance, some students from primary schools in Bangladesh who are active in all types of outdoor games, they are stronger in brain and body rather than others. Therefore, it is clear that going outside takes a part for healthy and sharp brain.
On the other hand, visiting in natural environment makes children more sociable through meeting with different people from several places. Indeed, they can achieve many knowledge to new things which are situated in surrounding area. For example, all little students can know about traditional cultures of numerous countries when they visit museums. Thus, every parent should focus on go outside with children to introduce with several materials and individuals.
To sum up, according to the arguments one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of child development are instrumental indeed. However, everyone should be concerned on children to active indoor and outdoor sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Go
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...everal places. Indeed, they can achieve many knowledge to new things which are situa...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...everal places. Indeed, they can achieve many knowledge to new things which are situated in sur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65653794387 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6731091975 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1178138425 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379771424197 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312846595941 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699411625003 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235972464827 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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