Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express an interest about computer course which you gave an advertisement in newspaper last week. I really want to take this course due to high demand of my area and future career.
I am a business studies student. I have completed my B. Com and major was accounting. As I mentioned, I have not any skills of computer due came from poorly rural area were lack of advanced technology. I eagerly interest about enrolling this course as there are no institution of my area. As you mentioned that, if someone wants to take this, they need to have completed elementary course. However, since I have not been skilled by computer, it would be possible to make special exception for me to enroll in the course. It would be really appreciated if you are enrolling me to this course.
Thank you for your kind consideration and hope to hearing your positive response soon.
Yours faithfully
najam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mand of my area and future career. I am a business studies student. I have c...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I am a business studies student. I have completed my B. Com and major wa...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dies student. I have completed my B. Com and major was accounting. As I mentioned...
^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ositive response soon. Yours faithfully najam
^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response soon. Yours faithfully najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74545454545 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6947556455 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7153908928 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361289060613 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111817284202 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837652656812 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215139578018 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905128399283 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.