Although tourists in many countries are a significant source of revenue, they are frowned upon for various reasons. For the tourist, however, traveling is supposed to broaden the mind and be an educational experience.
Use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with example and relevant evidence.
Nowadays, the tourism industry is a most important source of income for countries in different parts, while many local people and governments they do not agree with tourism activities, and many tourists frowned upon but traveling for travel lovers a good to broaden their mind and obtain different knowledge and experience. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss this topic.
On the one hand, this fact that tourism industry is the main part of counties’ revenue is unavoidable and many economists argue that by this industry countries can improve their infrastructures especially in transportation and accommodation, and also rely on it for a long time rather than the oil industry. On the other hand, local people believe that by some tourist behaviors their culture would be eruption during the time. However, any tourists, backpackers, and travel lovers travel to different countries yearly. They believe that traveling helps those to have an experience in their life, and even broaden the horizon of their mind. They believe that different culture, lifestyle, customs and … can make a new experience.
Many sociologists argue that by traveling and tourism we can create a small world with different language, customs, nationality, culture and … that help us reserve the culture that reaches us through ancestors, while there is idea against this believe that tourism in longtime cause culture shock in local or host societies. While the tourism industry nowadays, known as a green industry between other industries because they bring many advantages for societies.
To conclude, in my opinion, the advantages of tourism is weighed up the disadvantages of it, but same as other parts of societies it needs comprehensive planning that matches with their norms and culture. Therefore, it would be as a good source for countries in future especially countries with the mono-product especially countries that located in the Middle East.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tries that located in the Middle East.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36451612903 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92259666733 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.946004664 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.181818182 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242464291207 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908067029166 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077966624067 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156977576428 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743784697329 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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