Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while other argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, thanks to some robots we can do some special tasks easily and without waste of time and energy. However, some people believe that robots can drawback in our life. In contrast, others argue that with robots we can do things better. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss opponents and supporters and give my opinion, too.
On the one hand, there are some duties or tasks that are so difficult for the human to do them, or even dangerous for human’s health. For example, in some factories that produce poison materials. The robots can do some duties that defined for that part of the factory. On the other hand, the opponents believe that robots are causing people to have a sedentary lifestyle.
However, some special robots that most of them are invented in Japan can make a revolution in science and even in our life. The supporters argue that by robots we can analyze some difficult process and obtain valid results, especially in medical science and difficult surgeries. In my opinion, it is a big innovation for human beings, and through robots, the proportion of faults decreased.
In contrast, some people say, robots make our society have a high unemployment rate in some proficiency. Therefore, people cannot access to a good job because most parts of the factories lead by robots, but I think there are different parts in our society that robots cannot do that as good as humans, yet such as some manual works and handicrafts.
In conclusion, from my point of view, the advantages of the role of robots in our life weigh up the disadvantages mainly because the robots cause the process of making something or using of them in different parts of our society be more effective and not time-consuming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90939597315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.660989191 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48322147651 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8142454445 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260704121298 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107147332965 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584182913138 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152496253036 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415476993731 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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