Some people say that the government should stop TV and newspaper from showing crimes because media coverage of violent crimes is frightening people and encouraging criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Crime and violent behavior are common same as other issues in different societies, but showing these kinds of topics in media especially in newspaper and TV is controversial between people. Many people believe that showing them in media persuade people who commit a crime or make a crime, and cause of frightening between people. In the following paragraphs, I am going to put forward my ideas about this subject.
On the one hand, many people believe that the government should stop showing crimes in national media because these programs cause people frightening and become worried. On the other hand, someone believes that showing crimes especially robbery and kidnapping make people be more aware of their surrounds.
Some psychologists argue that by showing crime give motivation people who want to commit a crime, a somehow give chance to them to do it, while some governors in different level of societies believe that by showing criminal topics to people help them to know more about these kinds of issues, so they can better decide when this situation will occur for them how to deal with it, and how to manage it.
In my point of view, this issue has negative and positive sides. On the plus side, raise awareness of people in similar or even different situation although, sometimes frightening them. On the downside, give motivation to criminals to coverage their violent behaviors.
To conclude, the government would be better consider some points in sowing the violent and aggressive crimes and try to consider a different range of ages for these programs. Therefore, not only show people facts of their society, but also help people to manage their scares.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('somehow') instead an adjective, or a noun ('give') instead of another adjective.
...tion people who want to commit a crime, a somehow give chance to them to do it, while some gov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09025270758 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56673368922 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2716505879 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372268136215 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140194504237 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105724833317 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208880013552 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08058811572 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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