I am most proud of the fact that I am an intelligent student and a good time manager. I am always stand in the top 3 of my math classes and also achieve a few prizes when I was in secondary school. I passed into a gifted high school in my country, Vietnam, and trained here for 1 year after studying abroad in Canada. With my time management skill, I am still able to spend my time enough for my study, my family and open many opportunities in order to deal with new challenges and develop myself. Besides, I have a perennial passion for basketball, I was a captain of my team in secondary school and currently playing point guard for my high school. Others say that I am a talented and well-rounded individual, I can acquire knowledge in a short time. For instance, when I just knew about guitar, I have enabled to play for three days; and now, I am a great amateur guitar player, know a little bit about piano and especially, a Rubik solver.
- Some people say that experience a child has before starting school has the most influence on their future life Others say that experience as a teenager especially at school is more influential Discuss both views and give your opinion 51
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at l 90
- In many workplaces online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land What solution is better 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stood'.
Suggestion: stood
...nt and a good time manager. I am always stand in the top 3 of my math classes and als...
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Line 1, column 782, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
...a short time. For instance, when I just knew about guitar, I have enabled to play fo...
^^^^
Line 1, column 892, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...m a great amateur guitar player, know a little bit about piano and especially, a Rubik sol...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, still, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30167597765 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63337757348 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5507754182 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0490110526676 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216749708289 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213856375212 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490110526676 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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