I am most proud of the fact that I am an intelligent student and a good time manager. I am always stand in the top 3 of my math classes and also achieve a few prizes when I was in secondary school. I passed into a gifted high school in my country, Vietnam, and trained here for 1 year after studying abroad in Canada. With my time management skill, I am still able to spend my time enough for my study, my family and open many opportunities in order to deal with new challenges and develop myself. Besides, I have a perennial passion for basketball, I was a captain of my team in secondary school and currently playing point guard for my high school. Others say that I am a talented and well-rounded individual, I can acquire knowledge in a short time. For instance, when I just knew about guitar, I have enabled to play for three days; and now, I am a great amateur guitar player, know a little bit about piano and especially, a Rubik solver.
- People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic 61
- Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia at present and in future Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
- Some people say that experience a child has before starting school has the most influence on their future life Others say that experience as a teenager especially at school is more influential Discuss both views and give your opinion 51
- The graphs below shows the percentage of boys and girls aged 5 14 who participated in organized cultural activiies and sports in 2003 in Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stood'.
Suggestion: stood
...nt and a good time manager. I am always stand in the top 3 of my math classes and als...
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Line 1, column 782, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
...a short time. For instance, when I just knew about guitar, I have enabled to play fo...
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Line 1, column 892, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...m a great amateur guitar player, know a little bit about piano and especially, a Rubik sol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, so, still, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30167597765 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63337757348 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.5507754182 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0490110526676 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216749708289 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213856375212 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490110526676 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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