The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
There is no doubt that animal extinction has been a burning issue nowadays, which may be the result of human activities on land and in sea. The issue can calls for possible solutions to be adopted.
The extinction of wildlife species may result from many factors. First of all, it is worth considering that loss of habitat may have the most negative influence on biodiversity. Due to over-population, people need more space for living, which means people cut down more trees for construction. This leads to the significant increase in the rate of deforestation, which destroys the animals’ house. Another factor to considerate is that there has been an increase in demand for alternative remedies as well as high fashion garments so far. Specifically, some species are over-hunted for fur and leathers, as well as parts used in fashion, wearing habit, and traditional medicines. As a result, poaching has been more common-place for hunters to earn profit.
On the other hand, there are several measures which can be taken to mitigate this issue. Firstly, one solution could be for the government to gain people’s awareness by organizing talk shows and realistic TV programs about wildlife as well as the effect of animal species on our life in order to mitigate the death rate of animals. Secondly, the government should enforce strict laws and heavy punishment, besides setting up more national parks and wildlife habitat, so that the biodiversity of breeds can be maintained and the poaching may be prevented.
In conclusion, the animal extinction results from many causes, and there are several actions that can be taken to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15498154982 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92659708887 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0065742218 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155042353885 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564181118026 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744222987836 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11150992695 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776881788481 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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