Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Technology is sure to have far-reaching to all aspects of our life, especially working and studying. Nowadays, getting extra inexpensive and easy to use the technology that's the reason why many people are working from home, children's learning activities as well. Some people and I believe that have so many positive developments but this issue also has its drawbacks.
I strongly agree that technology is an essential factor in our life at this age because its benefits make people more convenient related to working and studying. First of all, it saves money and time for parents. For instance, there is no need to buy office clothes for them to work and school clothes for their children to study at school. In addition, they don't need to spend the time to take their children to and from school and not waste their time getting stuck in traffic tram in the rush hour. Instead, they will have more possibilities for taking family responsibilities and building their marriage bond.
If we do this way, it brings several benefits for children. For example, learning from home that the children will be active for their time, not only they could get more awareness of their studies and be able to determine what they truly love and passion for, but also they will have more opportunities to play and get close with their family.
By contrast, if this way is implemented, the parents could be disturbed by their own children during work time. For children, that are deemed to get more dangerous when they get internet all time because they could be the victim of cybercrimes as well as learning with a teacher that's easy to acknowledge what problem children are encountering.
Everything always has two sides and this issue is no exception. We should consider carefully about doing this way. Overall, the advantages outweigh more than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358974359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6623485749 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1437491798 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233267023553 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818560497654 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460465123041 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139238586377 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408074610247 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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