Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas.
Why is this?
What problems does this cause?
In recent decades, living in the city is becoming popular amid the society around the globe where a new evidence shows a growing number of people settling in urban areas. Several reasons as, facility and people belief, can be involved and also some problems can emerge due to this change.
facilities and access in the town are proven more adequate when compared to in the village. For instance, shop facilities are spread widely in the city, therefore, people can fulfil daily needs easily and then transportation access linked everywhere which can ease people to run and mobilise their business and activities. Furthermore, the another motive in this issue is a strong belief amid society especially in developing countries that people will succeed, get prosperity and well-being when settling in urban areas. this is found in Indonesia where individuals tend to reside in the city even though they have insufficient knowledge and skills because of this belief.
unequal infrastructure development may be the main problem caused by this phenomenon. The government more focuses on the city to improve the facilities, access and places to support people living in the city than establishing infrastructure in rural area and village which more need to modernise. this condition will significantly affect economic growth between city and village. The another effect due to this change is overpopulation in the town. this may cause homeless and poor living condition for some people since most condition in the developing countries, the local government is unable to provide affordable housing for them.
In a nutshell, adequate facilities and access and society belief about living in the city are the key issues behind this trend which can create also some problems as overpopulation and unequal infrastructure establishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36111111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88874699171 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2419329591 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300229175407 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110122237497 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363885485999 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179186398257 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631103368595 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.