The art plays an important role in enriching our culture. However, many people these days pay less attention and giving it up for other aspects such as sciences, technologies… In this essay, I analyze reasons behind this trend and also suggest some solution to encourage people to preserve and develop arts.
Despite the fact that arts has greatly contributed to enriching our culture, it plays little or no role in improving our life. For example, people cannot admire great art paintings or marvel at brilliant sculptures to live comfortably instead of the contribution of science and technology can be of some help. Daily tasks are completed faster and more effectively due to the advent of modern technologies, which leads to increasing the great output of societies. It is impossible for humans to image the life without modern technologies. Another reason for the popularity reduction of arts is that it receives little or no financial aid from the government, therefore most artists or art galleries don’t have enough money for preserving as well as maintaining arts. The stats still support art and artists, no special incentive is given to produce masterpieces of art.
However, it is true that arts are critical in arousing national interest and it seems be of paramount important. Therefore, the government should hold accountable for preserving and developing art by opening more and more art galleries, organizing exhibits and cultural programs, encouraging a huge people to take an interest in arts. Moreover, it is essential for the national body to create jobs in this sector as well as investing its fund for organizations that maintained art and person who is genuine talent in art.
In the conclusion, the government should be accountable for distributing its funds arts because each sector has its own contribution towards the development of the country.
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- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21782178218 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96898027286 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6508358887 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193818223969 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756550388141 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440534086679 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119343390946 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438622655794 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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