Art subject is crucial for children,so everyone should learn it in school.
Do you agree or disagree?
This is true that in education system toddler should learn art subject along with other subjects because of its importance.This essay agrees with this notion because it helps students to make well concentrate on whole study and bring advantages in their future.
Due to art subject students would able to give their in best in all subjects .This is because, children in these days taking too much stress owing to burden of study, which could lead them to poor performance in academic journey.If they can carry this subject in school,then it will help them to overcome this pressure with their favourite activities such as singing, dancing, and acting.For example,recent study by news channel founds that in 2000, in whole the world those students who had this subject in school got more marks as compared to other students.
What is more, learners have more than one alternative to choose their career in any field.In other words, some strugglers are not able to make their career in their first choosing field may be because of bad luck or others reasons .So, having more than one skill from their school experience would convert them in many possibilities of success in other profession.For instance,in many interviews by successful people always excepted that art subject is very important for everyone in schools.
To conclude, children could easily learn everything which taught by tutor because of art subject also would help them in their progressing years at some crucial stages. So that, it is compulsory for everyone to learn it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09842519685 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62658624414 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 193.04196435 49.4020404114 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 259.0 106.682146367 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 7.06120827912 289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25520833 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16196662966 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530860611986 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165912873674 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670245245925 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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