Art subject is very important for children,so everyone should learn it in school.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education plays an imperative role in our day to day life. Without this knowledge it is very difficult to cope with modern world.Slew inhabitants reckon that in education system toddler should learn art subject along with other subjects because of its importance.This essay agrees with this statement.In my further writing I will discuss some reasons along with suitable conclusion.
To begin with,due to art subject students would able to give their in best in all subjects .This is because, children in these days taking too much stress owing to burden of study,which could lead them to poor performance in academic journey.If they can carry this subject in school,then it will help them to overcome this pressure with their favourite activities such as singing, dancing, and acting.For example,recent study by news channel founds that in 2000,in whole the world those students who had this subject in school got more marks as compared to other students.In addition,they will become skillful and manipulate any difficulty situation in their school time and in future.This is happens only with totally fit and strong body including mind by taking part in art.
What is more,learners have more than one alternative to choose their career in any field.In other words,some strugglers are not able to make their career in their first choosing field may be because of bad luck or others reasons.A s a result,having more than one skill from their school experience would convert them in many possibilities of success in other profession.For instance,in many interviews by successful people always excepted that art subject is very important for everyone in schools.
To sum up,children could easily learn everything which is taught by tutor because of art subject also would help them in their progressing years at some crucial stages. So that,should be compulsory for everyone to learn it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27483443709 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8934202286 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639072847682 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.026650281 49.4020404114 524% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 265.5 106.682146367 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254748252988 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133090634938 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810688123446 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159555553481 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536129202729 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.