Art is an integral part of of our life. It refreshes our mind and breaks the monotony of work. If children are taught art from an young age, it will bring about a positive impact in their mental development.
Art is a form of entertainment. After hours of work, our brain gets lethargic, tired and so , our productivity reduces. In other words, monotony takes over the zeal to work. That is why we need art to break the lethargy and refresh us. As we become more and more modern , new art forms will emerge and the way we perceive art will change, music and theatre will modernise, but will not perish from our lives.
Art is necessary for the proper mental growth of a child, Even though it seems like a waste of time, art has a important role to play in creating a mature and empathetic future generation.For example, the greatest physicist of all time, Albert Einstein loved playing violin and it helped him to think clearly, Also, art compliments the academic education and prevent it from getting boring.
Art plays a vital role in enteraining us and also helps development of a child. So arts should be incorporated to the curriculum.
- Some think that only those people who have worked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position Do you agree 89
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Arts including art music and theatre are considered to be important in society Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle Should the art be included in the school programs 56
- Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work What problems arise from this situation What measures can be taken to deal with it 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66502463054 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65652642734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.5673407431 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325308746944 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13279711993 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843687836338 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200672859397 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375790474976 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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