Energy supply has always been one of the greatest concerns of human beings. Nowadays, many believe that atomic energy is a good alternative for other sources of energy while many others think it can pose a serious threat to people and animals' lives. In this essay, I consider both views and explain why I think that atomic energy should replace other sources.
On the one hand, the opponents of atomic energy are concerned about the risk of accidents. If anything goes wrong in the power station, it could lead to a tragedy to humans and animals living near the station. For instance, the accident that occurred during a safety test in Chernobyl caused a disaster that ended up with more that 500,000 deaths. Moreover, the harmful radiation in nuclear power may have a diverse impact on people's health. If people are exposed to this substance, they may suffer from various serious health issues such as cancer or even diseases related to agent orange.
On the other hand, atomic energy can be widely considered as an environmentally friendly source of energy because it produces zero emission. In other words, we would overcome the problems of air pollution and global warming if this new method of producing power becomes widespread. For example, Germany, one of cleanest countries in Europe, has the largest share of electricity generated by nuclear power. Also, replacing fossil fuels with renewable sources is vital as the constant use of oil and gas will lead to their shortage. Clearly, decisive actions should be taken to save these important materials for future generations.
In conclusion, although nuclear power can cause tremendous results if misused, we should not dismiss all the benefits it brings. But we should rather use it with a precautionary approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the cleanest'.
Suggestion: of the cleanest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08873720137 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57681215099 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0975371237 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221667920401 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657489695925 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483846216432 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120927475593 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482930433869 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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