The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the society they live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, the video game has become an inevitable part of many people. Some people think it benefits people, whereas, someone argues that causes many drawbacks. In my opinion, I do believe playing video games is both negatively and positively affect people's lives as well as the whole society.
On the one hand, the lives of many people have become a lot fascinating thanks to video games that are invented for not only entertaining but also educational purposes. Apart from amazingly visible images as well as outstanding sound effects on these games, that are extremely useful in term of relaxing, there are some educational games are helpful for students, especially those with special needs. For example, kids will be able to improve their way of critical thinking, solving-problems skills and understand some historical events if they play the Oregon Trail, which came onto the scene in the late 70 years. Moreover, games have offered many great career opportunities for talented people who could design and play video games well. For instance, the father of Flabby Bird has made thousands of dollars from it and playing games online also became a new type of sport, E-sport that has been held in some international competitions.
On the other hand, because of the undeniable attractiveness of video games being equipped in almost every digital device, people may be negatively impacted if they do not use it for the right purposes. Firstly, the huge amount number of teenagers are becoming addicted to online games due to their low self-control, particularly since these games are very easily accessible to them. In this way, they could not pay attention to their studies and their results at school will be gradually declined. Secondly, game online comes in different genres and most of them are violent content like fighting, shooting, and killing. Some children can not differentiate games from reality and end up being violent explaining why the rate of juvenile crime increase in the past several years. Therefore, game addiction has detrimental influences on each people and their society.
In conclusion, video games are useful in terms of entertainment but people should set and enforce limits on games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18611111111 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72977269212 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4845909084 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.466666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155721124932 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602729276265 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421877274379 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108886617401 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00815695789556 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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