Nowadays, the retirement age has been various around the world. In turn, there are many factors that influence to deciding it. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that retiring early has many advantages compared to disadvantages. Here, I am going to make my opinion clear.
Firstly, as I mentioned before, deciding retirement age is contributed by some factors. One possibility is overpopulation that governments are obliged to do the reduction. Secondly, losing labour ability is the other factor. It is crystal clear that when workers get old, normally, they lose workability, thus, they are not able to work enough. Finally, the other cause is to need for young staff. Both government and society need the young, and certainly, their creative ideas. It is undeniable that young employees have sufficient labour ability to compare with older ones.
To my mind, advantages of early retirement overweigh drawbacks. People who prefer to retire early, have taken more advantages of it.One of the benefits of retiring early is time. They get more time to enjoy hobbies, travellings, and also doing volunteer work, and, surely spending more time with family and friends. Furthermore, those who retire early, may still hale enough for physical activities such as jogging, swimming, even mountain climbing. Next, the other one is better health that people who do not work anymore, they are away from stress, tiredness and also they get more time to do exercise.
In conclusion, I am completely convinced that early retirement has more benefits over disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83071997213 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2033977016 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260308378364 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885311345939 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980949599397 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159098746447 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549454072494 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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