The average person's health is deteriorating at an alarming rate and it is believed by many that humans will suffer with lower health and fitness levels in the future. I believe this is a true fact considering the prevailing lifestyle of people and environmental degradation.
One of the compelling reasons is because the majority of the people nowadays are following unhealthy styles of living which affect health levels badly. When it comes to eating habits, people are moving towards unhealthy foods such as fast foods due to convenience, which contains manifold unhealthy substances. Not only do the eating habits, but also sedentary lifestyle also has made the condition worse, which brings this issue to another level. Worse yet, younger generation is also following the same pattern and due to this trend it is highly likely that our future generation will suffer from manifold health issues.
Another strong reason would be the ever increasing environmental pollution and climate change. The air quality is degrading rapidly, raising the risk of future environment not being able to provide quality air to the burgeoning human population. This has already become an issue in countries such as India and China, where people's life expectancy has lessened substantially as a result of air pollution. Similarly water pollution has caused many health issues across the world and things only getting worse day by day, hence there is no doubt that it can be expected humans to have decreased health and fitness levels.
In conclusion, the average health standard is likely to decrease in the future due to the poor lifestyle and bad environmental condition. It is, therefore, crucial to make necessary adjustments in every aspect of human lives to make things better for the future.
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- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
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- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
The average persons health is deteriorating at an alarming ...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...tantially as a result of air pollution. Similarly water pollution has caused many health ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72374532221 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2526399215 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169653688614 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608364910356 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338816449321 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100662002575 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115592505569 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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