It is believed by some that governments should regulate the designing of new buildings while others believe owners of the buildings should be given freedom to choose an appropriate design. This essay discusses both sides of the views and then I will give my own perspective.
Some believe that governments should take over the designing of buildings because they can decide which designs are appropriate for a city and perform proper town and country planning. In other words, if there is a centralised government authority to regulate the designs, they can plan all upcoming buildings in a way that new buildings fit aesthetically and won't harm the look and feel of a city. For example, in Singapore, authorities only approve designs which comply to the unique style in a particular area. Moreover, it also worth to mention that governments can appoint the most appropriate and experienced professionals to engage in designing of buildings so that they can ensure each and every designing are in proper hands, leading to beautiful cities eventually.
Those who oppose to the above notion argue that owners should have the freedom to choose appropriate design in a way that it fits their personal preferences and financial situation. In other words, owners can come up with architectures which are not only cost effective, but also easy to construct. Moreover, it is generally the case that whenever government authorities involve in processes, things tend to be more complex and time consuming because procedures could take extended time to complete.
In conclusion, both sides of the views have their merits. However, I believe that government involvement is better in new constructions due to the facts that it will eventually lead attractive cities with properly designed buildings.
- Some people believe that time spent on television video and computer games can be beneficial to children Others believe this has negative effect on a child Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods To what extent do you agree 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 78
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the 73
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...wners should have the freedom to choose appropriate design in a way that it fits their pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23693379791 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93162871796 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.765699451 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343958830088 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120278293184 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094163797063 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200171721954 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731255162569 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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