The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it is true that the life style choices and the environmental factors effect the human life time. According to scientists average persons life will be lower in the future than now. this essay will disscuss the possible reasons that affect human life span.
Firstly, according to the reaserchers, lifestyle choices are the main reason that cause a negative effect on peoples health. Nowadys people tends to inherit unhealthy habbits like fast food, smoking and lack of proper physical excersices. as an example, people who have a busy schedule more likely to eat fast food than balanced diet mainly to save time, however it is the main cause for heart problems and obesity.
Secondly, environment polution also have a positive impact on redusing the life span of human in general. Water polution and air polution is the main cause for raspatory illnsses and digestive problems. Although people often argue that poor lifestyle choices are the main factor, polution also have a direct impact. as an example, carbon monoxide gas is considered as a leathel to human, some highligt it as a silent killer, but we alknow that all the fosil fuel vehicles will exhaust carbon monoxide.
in conclution, as the country develops people more likely to addopt these poor life choices, and environment polution also enevitable so that they don't know how it will effect their health. as we all know average persons life in our grand parents time is way more higher than now. i completely agree with the statement and i believe that the government needs to educate people on this as it will be a major issue in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46443086322 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.751915191 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144960916495 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579342729986 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537631289682 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919499571613 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454848273926 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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