The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, there has been an increase in the quality of living condition within the society and there are those who say that health among the individuals is greater in the upcoming years than it is today. However, I predominantly agree as the health standard is predetermined according to the ongoing crisis in the world.
It is explicably true that more people are being more conscious now and it was before. This is due to the ill-effects that they see as a threat due to their poor habits and that with them subscribing to certain lifestyle modifications. As such, fitness enthusiasts have subscribed themselves to regular exercise, proper diet with organic foods and daily consultation with there attending physicians which they see as a good investment to achieve optimum level of health and wellness.
However, with the current situation in the world, people are more exposed to environmental hazards. The ongoing pollution has given enough space for carbon excess to be stored within the atmosphere thus, aggravating the effects of global warming. Recently, wildfires have spread in most of the regions in the amazon rainforest due to the increasing temperature of the planet which has caused global hiatus as it further endangers the ecosystem as a whole.
Furthermore, a variety of infectious diseases have been found to be difficult to treat due to the increased level of immunity by many infections to antibiotic therapy. The development of multiple drug resistant bacteria have made first generation antibacterial medicines to be ineffective. As a result, an increasing number of people are becoming prone to these communicable infections which certainly affect those who are less fortunate and cannot afford medical treatment.
As a whole, although there are some who are of the belief that the health standard is greater than it is now, I am of the view that it is going to more of the opposite. Even if they are conscious about their body, biomedical and environmental hazards continue to pose as threats to humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if they are conscious about their body, biomedical and environmental hazards con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16816816817 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93110322932 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2805848123 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117505378037 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420750585636 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295364554259 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631468542985 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019363803398 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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