Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
The Internet plays a vital role in the development of the world, but some people believe that the Internet has changed the way we live both negatively and positively. Personally, I strongly agree with the above idea.
There is no doubt that the Internet supports people to improve productivity in working and studying, The available Internet makes education accessible to many people due to the great amount of information resource. Therefore, it is easier for them to get material for analysis. In addition, a lot of software and machine connected with the Internet are used for construction and production instead of manual labors. Moreover, it seems to have no distance between people and people since everyone can keep in touch with each other through online devices no matter where they live in the Internet age. For example, the Internet is assumed to be more critical and significant for communication in the case of social distancing when the pandemic breaks out.
On the other hand, some drawbacks of the Internet still exists and highly impact human living. Obviously, the virtual community can attract people more than reality does. Many users, especially young children spend too much time surfing on social networks, which results in many physical and mental problems relating to eyes and anti-social behaviors. Other facts show that not all information on the Internet is correct, so many people can get online unreliable sources by accident that leads to their wrong understanding and awareness. Many bad contents and fake news with sensational titles speared fast might damage other people's reputation.
In conclusion, the Internet brings disadvantages and advantages for our daily life. People should use it effectively to improve their standard of living
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27561837456 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75352775897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.820064215 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254201400458 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817999327085 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414897026362 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151531671815 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038153377518 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.