Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Recently, information technology become available for people around the world, so working from home, as well as, home education is more and more popular. In my personal ideal, the trend has both positive and negative consequences.
Firstly, I think that the opportunity to work and study at home is beneficial for many people. Using the smart equipment as communication tools, adults can discuss all issues with partners and clients from home although they live in remote areas. In terms of education, the development of technology allow students to follow educational program with the available Internet. Online courses and work online are very flexible, so people can arrange their timetables which best suit their family needs and lifestyles. In addition, studying and working online are suitable for people who have a tight budget because they can cut down the cost for travelling.
On the other hand, computer-aided learning is still harmful because of some reasons. Firsltly, it is difficult for many people to pay attention when they work and study online, and the outcome is achieved less effectively due to the lack of individual attention. For example, children who highly needs their teachers' direct enagement in studying process to gain good achievement. Without supervisors, they might be addicted with other interesting activities on the Internet instead of building strong relationships with classmates and improving social skills.
In conclusion, worldwide work and study online spreading has both negative as positive effects. It is important for people to determine the way that is appreciate their understanding and ablity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties on the Internet instead of building strong relationships with classmates and...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...for people to determine the way that is appreciate their understanding and ablity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45490196078 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88100542064 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2060092943 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289910434224 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953093614611 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953505232607 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181460399028 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106566056183 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.