Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Due to the advanced and easily accessible technology, mature people start working from home, and adolescents are also attending their classes online from home worldwide. Although technology makes human life more comfortable, its drawbacks should not be overlooked.
To begin with, the internet has a significant impact on human being's life due to several reasons. Technology provided multiple opportunities to individuals to start their careers online even while sitting in their homes and spend their precious time with family members. Also, people do not need to go outside for work and hence they can save their money as well as time. On the other hand, I believe that face-to-face interaction is very important for civilization to understand others, share experiences, and update existing knowledge. Furthermore, the 21st-century 4C skills for example communication, collaboration, critical thinking, and creative skills can be improved by working in a group at any organization instead of using technology only. As a result, the all-around development of a person is possible.
Moreover, the students prefer to learn online in spite of going to educational centers on regular basis. As there are numerous meeting applications where the learner can join their class such as Zoom, Big blue button, and Microsoft team etcetera. Also, a lot of academic stuff is available on different websites that make learning more easier and convenient. In this way, the scholar who becomes the victim of bullying and discrimination can also preserve themselves. They spend most of their time with their parents at home while studying. Despite this, technology has also some negative impacts on children's health. Children sufferers from eye-related problems and obesity when they studied on the computer throughout the day and do not go outside for a walk. Also, they will be unable to develop their social skills that are mandatory for becoming good citizenship.
In conclusion, technology has a more negative impact although it is beneficial in several manners. Overall, for becoming a good citizen, there is a need to go to work and schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ernet has a significant impact on human beings life due to several reasons. Technology...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...n different websites that make learning more easier and convenient. In this way, the schola...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94144005606 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586021505376 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1831276131 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403562558146 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116062913094 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16581118387 0.0667982634062 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314053358845 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.316889314587 0.056905535591 557% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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