Some people believe that the government should spend money on art and education. Others say most schools should be privately funded. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by few people that the administration ought to provide funds to the educational institutions for integrating art and education programs while others argue that the school should be self-funded. In this essay, I shall shed light on both perspectives by giving my own view.
To commence with, there are several reasons due to which the regime should spend a huge amount of currency on art education in the curriculum at schools. Most public schools that provide free education to the students are financially not strong enough to implement art and education programs that require multiple resources to engage the students in art activities. Moreover, the schools cannot hire professional and efficient trained teachers who can provide effective education to the learners to develop and improve their art skills. Hence, the ministry should provide a sufficient amount of funds to schools.
On the other hand, people argue that the school management should initiate art and education programs by funding privately. As the government has some other projects that need to be completed as its early convenience to provide a healthy and safe lifestyle to the civilization. For example, In India, there is a shortage of hospitals and experienced doctors for the welfare of society due to which numerous people are losing their precious lives even at their earlier stages. Therefore, the schools should spend money themselves to provide efficient art education to the scholars instead of depending on the government. In this way, several problems will be resolved, and people will enjoy their life.
In conclusion, the government should spend its budget to provide the facilities to the people for a better lifestyle, and schools should be self-responsible and funded for the integration of art education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91891447775 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3530366059 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416735694733 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15558548833 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884447920894 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273363869166 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488099001323 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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