The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportations is by encouraging people to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
It is believed by some that a great way to mitigate the problems related to traffic congestion and transportation is by getting people to move to cities instead of living in urbanisations or rural areas. While this statement might sounds like a logical solution, I believe it would contribute to major problems. People displacements from rural areas to cities could lead to overpopulation.
People moving from the countryside or suburbs to cities in order to eradicate transportation issues will most likely create new problems. Firstly, if people were encouraged to move from far away areas to the city, it would dramatically increased the density of its population and as a result, become over populated. A direct consequence of this action will be the rise of cars on the road, leading to major traffic congestions. For example, in Dublin the traffic is very bad during peak times and it can take at least an hour to get from one extreme of the city to the other.
Furthermore, not everyone wants to live in the city. Some people prefer to live in the country side as it offer benefits that cities cant. People are in touch with nature, there is less stress, less pollution, and less crime, which makes it ideal for bringing up children. Despite the lack of job opportunities, people are happier.
In order to deal with transportation issues, alternative roads could be built to ease the traffic and at the same time more jobs would be created.
The Government has to invest in infrastructure and development for cities and towns alike, instead of persuading them to move small populations to where transport services are. It is well known that overpopulated cities have more traffic congestion and higher crime rates than the countryside. Finally, it is my belief that encouraging carpooling would be by far more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...reas to the city, it would dramatically increased the density of its population and as a ...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y side as it offer benefits that cities cant. People are in touch with nature, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, as to, at least, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01954397394 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409954635 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3863265711 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25508606764 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763235188013 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422444461412 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129852603965 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175436544403 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.