Some people believe that is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Other think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a fact that regular exercise is proven beneficial for one's well-being. Therefore, some people believe that Physical Education should be part of the curricula in school-age children, however, some argue that children should focus on more academic subjects instead. From my point of view, I believe that Physical Education is as important as the cor subjects. Although it is true it could be done after school hours.
To begin with, Physical Education in the school curriculum should be seen as a positive development. This is because school hours nowadays are longer than they used to be in the past and the attention span in children is short. Consequently making it hard for students to maintain their focus.
Bringing in activities such as exercise would allow them to release stress and socialise while exercising. Also, they will keep healthy at the same time and as a result they will not miss days at school for being sick. Furthermore, scientific research claims that regular exercising improves learning, so by adding Physical Education children could improve their performance on the other subjects.
In the other hand, life has gotten more and more competitive that it is of paramount importance to dedicate sufficient time to core subjects, so children can continue education and are able to get into universities. The time used for Physical Education could be used to provide extra support to those who are falling behind.
Even though it is important to exercise, this could be done after school hours and parents should make sure their children spend enough time outdoors exercising while playing.
To conclude, incorporating Physical Education classes for all school children is an advantage which would benefit the overall performance of the children in school. They will be able to release energy through physical activity while keeping healthy as well. And this translates into more attendance as there would be less kids missing school due to being sick. Moreover, scientific research claims that regular exercise improves learning. Even though exercise is an activity that can be done at anytime, doing it after school could be challenging given that children have big amounts of homework. It would mean less quality family time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66781158124 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513736263736 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1011745354 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.578947368 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918625551343 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833676459544 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165387798834 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713932267853 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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