The best way to educate children is by using the internet in every lesson To what extent do you share this opinion What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children

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The best way to educate children is by using the internet in every lesson. To what extent do you share this opinion? What other ways are there of making lessons effective for children?

Regarding the development of methodology in education, internet plays a significant role for children in teaching and learning process. I personally agree that the utilisation of internet is effective for some extent, even though there are several other methods too.

Perhaps, one major factor for this is that internet provides many references which are beneficial for children that can enhance their knowledge and help them in doing their homework. Furthermore, it would appear that the flexibility of internet allows children to access it 24-hour. This may lead them gaining more information than what they get from school which is limited by time. Finally, we should consider that children will be independent and responsible for their own problem. For instance, their assignments which are given at school can be finished by searching on internet without asking help to their teachers or parents.

Looking from another perspective, it might be said that not all the contents on internet are appropriate for children’s age and necessity. However, I believe that such drawback would be overcome through the control and guidance from the teachers and parents.

Turning to other methods, role play which involve children in the process of learning directly will increase their self-confidence and comprehend the material easily. For example, they act as a headman who face some problems related to littering, afterwards they may grasp from that simulation how to solve the problem. Moreover, study tour, a learning method to explain something to students through experiencing and observing directly, will satisfy children who usually have great curiosity.

Al in all, it seems to me that internet brings convenience for children in learning process because of the completeness of the references and flexibility to access it. Other methods to maximise the learning process are role pay and study tour.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87898674171 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3812143208 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204135605875 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074493819265 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041879712178 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11384960178 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469276261293 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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