The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transportation in 24 hours a day, and seven days a week. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Traffic congestion is one of the serious problems in our daily life nowadays. Thus, some people say that it would be better if the governments provide free public transportation for citizens to use. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this point of view for several reasons.
First, it is impractical to make public vehicles free. The governments could use the charge that the users pay once they travel by these transports to give the workers and drivers an amount of higher salary for their hard work. There are a number of people who don't show their respect to keep the facilities in use if they don't need to pay any fees and charge for that leads to the fact that there would be no vehicles which could be used for a long period of time. Hence, these transportation might need to be maintained in order to run smoothly and it is necessary for the citizens to pay an amount of money to help keep the construction well-qualified.
Second, there are a number of specific areas which need to be cared so as to reduce the traffic congestion. With the higher quantity of people using road facilities, the policy-makers have to plan to build more roads and qualified construction to help decreased the traffic jams and loosen the flow of traffic on the roads. Moreover, cutting-edge technology such as cameras should be provided so that it could reduce the burden and reliance on human beings and limit the number of traffic accidents while there are not any police officers. Not only money may be used on road construction, but it could also pay for higher education system for the future generations, who could raise more awareness on keeping the public facilities as their private ones.
In conclusion, it is not worth letting citizens use public transports free since there are more areas need to be paid, and raising the awareness and people's respect on public facilities should be done before providing free transportation so that they could not damage any construction because of not paying for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t to keep the facilities in use if they dont need to pay any fees and charge for tha...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...vehicles which could be used for a long period of time. Hence, these transportation might need...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'these transportations'?
Suggestion: this transportation; these transportations
... used for a long period of time. Hence, these transportation might need to be maintained in order to...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...f specific areas which need to be cared so as to reduce the traffic congestion. With the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80057803468 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71089792441 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8733653133 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.416666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160236835745 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746123537004 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045472587541 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128479602695 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577882503327 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.