The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Planning for ten minutes saves a whole twenty-four hours of the day. As people tend to forget or being careless when it comes to scheduling an expressly important day, the critical day becomes chaos. And yet, surprisingly, more numerous people still do not map properly. In this essay, I will communicate my total opposition to the statement and reasons for that will be outfitted.
Vacations are for the family and everyone's delight, chiefly young members, and should be planned meticulously, including young members. Kids, for instance, are the most anxious to reach holidays to celebrate and enjoy food and other entertainment activities. This is because parents are typically busy working, and no enough time would be spent with them regularly. However, if parents were not planned for that special, the kids would not get what they are longly waiting for. Therefore, all family members must set down and outline the whole celebration period, as it is a holistic decision and touches all of them in some way.
Not only people stay home on holidays, but they also travel when the time and budget favors. Some people travel to different destinations, in or out of the country, on vacations as they, ordinarily, exempt from work or school and permitted to go for recreation. And yet, with no proper planning, it will not be accomplished, or it becomes out of budget, as the ticket prices would be doubled as the time goes. Nevertheless, even if they were able to make it in time, still, it would be mediocre, principally in the eyes of the children.
In conclusion, I have presented my appeal to the fact that people should plan their holiday to get the most out of it. I also gave some grounds why I feel this way. It is vivid that people with no planning not any righter than those who do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79421221865 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68581342217 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6398433667 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180039282669 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591705507441 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433722542709 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112257606872 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549030756432 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.