It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
When I think about traveling, I instantly think about what would be worse could happen to people who stay in their country for the life-time. This is because I believe exploring other nations not only expanding knowledge but also getting people open-minded. In this essay, I will express my appeal to travel as it has a positive impact on a person.
To start with, there is a crucial question that should be asked: why Asian are considered more innovative than others? The simple answer is because they wrap up the world as much as they can. They travel a lot rather than watching others' cultures on television. Take China, for instance, they have the most developed of the state-of-the-art technology, and it is, consequently, a result of being endeavor travelers, as they can be found in each and every country. If they had not explored the world, they would not have known the technological needs of people around the globe.
Another positive side of touching on other cultures is learning about the world better. They, at least, will know the map of the world because some people, unfortunately, do not. I have seen a video on YouTube where an interviewer asked a random participant in New York about a specific location on the map; they had to name the country that was pointed on. Most of them fail, as they have not been out of the United States. You can imagine, if they had visited at least a country, they would have known the world map. This is only an example of how traveling will broaden a person's knowledge and make him/her aware of an obvious aspect related to world map.
Not a travel would make a person great, it is a critic that can be raised from opponents. However, those individuals did usually do not have the gist or money to travel around, even in around their country, as they have not tasted the joy and the great learning experience.
To conclude, I have discussed my agreement with the statement above, and also I pointed out an objection contended. Overall, people should visit other nations and benefit from the astonishing experience they will get by abandoning the setting in the comfort zone. This will make individuals' lives more exciting and open an eye for the great cultures around the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, at least, for instance, i think, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59469690674 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539641943734 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.358492687 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5263157895 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977802407971 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339419674212 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268007509755 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619073710474 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164437662512 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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