The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the optimum way to control juvenile crimes is to educate their parents with parenting skills. From my perspective, the aforesaid idea is one of the efficient methods, but not the solely ideal one.
On the one hand, youth, beyond the doubt, are significantly affected by their parents. A large number of criminal acts perpetrated by teenagers tend to be caused by the lack of proper instructions from their parents as they start to enter their sensitive stage of grow-up. For instance, youth whose parents are too engrossed on work are likely to be induced to get involved in crimes. Therefore, it is essential for parents to acquire parental skills to educate their children.
On the other hand, apart from parents, young people are also enormously influenced by their surroundings. In fact, in the contemporary society, juvenile may spend much time with friends and teachers rather than parents. Thus, youth's demeanor could be severely affected by their friends. For instance, in Vietnam, a vast number of high school students have succumbed to temptation of their peers to be engaged in alcohol, drug and the like. Hence, it is highly recommended that schools should develop courses that help students to resist inducement and undesirable behaviors.
In conclusion, various methods including educating parents with child-bearing skill should be coordinated in response to youth criminal offenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32743362832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81751066653 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0188114967 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287494281406 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111520624434 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123121323329 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189047399052 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815964699223 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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