In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, environment cleanliness has become one of the main pressing issue, required immediate attention. From last few decades because of the economical growth and industrialization of countries, numerous significant effects are there in environment. In the essay will discuss what reasons might lead to this issue and what we can do to ameliorate them.
In one hand, it is reasonable to say that main reason behind drastic change in environment is because of the uncontrolled usage of fuels in every industry. These industries are the main reason of all kind of pollutions. For instance, air pollution , water pollution, soil pollution, radioactive pollution, acid rain, smog etc. Therefore, in order to reduce all kind of pollution, numerous of people have opinion that government authorities ought release some laws regarding the hike of fuels.
On the other hand, nevertheless, it is the fact that to solve environment issue, fuel cost increment is not the only solution. Myriad of people believes that to address environmental damage control, there are numerous option available, for example in place of using fuels industries should focus on using renewable energy ( hydro energy, solar energy. etc) in efficient ways. Government body could use an important role in creating and implementing strict law and order for prevention pollution. Like, industries should be allowed to use only eco friendly products and there must be limitations on the usage of fossil fuels.
In the conclusion, I would like to mention that this is the peak time to save the earth from detrimental effects of pollution. I have firm belief that with the help of government and every individuals we could handle the situation before it become intractable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
.... From last few decades because of the economical growth and industrialization of countri...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... pollutions. For instance, air pollution , water pollution, soil pollution, radioa...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: OUGHT_SAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ought to release'?
Suggestion: ought to release
...ave opinion that government authorities ought release some laws regarding the hike of fuels. ...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s should focus on using renewable energy hydro energy, solar energy. etc in effic...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Etc
...ble energy hydro energy, solar energy. etc in efficient ways. Government body coul...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ituation before it become intractable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37722419929 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00574747465 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0672966184 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940641666177 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292583428399 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404824987535 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052909893202 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502712415719 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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