The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Issues regarding environmental degradation have had been observed as one of the majorly growing concerns in recent times. This has encouraged many to propose that incrementing the fuel costs can dramatically a assist in resolving the respective problems.However this being an exaggerating solution cannot potentially hinder the nature depletion single-handedly. The following composition justifies my views with appropriate explanation.
To shed light on the positive outcomes of increasing fuel prices is the lessening of private modes of transportation.This as a result will trim the proportion of personal vehicles and therefore bolster the usage of public means of transport.This solution can undoubtedly help reducing pollution caused due to extravagant automobiles. For an instance, according to Japan state statistics on pollution, in 2016 it was stated that increase in taxation level of four wheeler by 20% has resulted in 8% cut in car sales. This can definitely participate in decreasing air pollution.
However, this phenomena as a result may have several negative impacts on industrialization and so on the nation's economy as a whole.This is to say that, as demand for automobiles will observe a downtime in its flourishing market it will knowingly or unknowingly affect the country's GDP. Furthermore, not only few using Industries will face financial losses but also will drastically impact the workforce employed there. According to a BBC news in January 2017, statistics regarding increase in unemployment percentage due to closer of several factories in past decade due to falling GDP has surged by 30%. This as a result will never encourage any state administration to increase fuel prices drastically.
To conclude,I believe that even if increasing levels of tax on fuel is suggested as one of the good solutions to environment problems, its real life implementation is seemingly impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57534246575 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47232578399 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654109589041 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.894635901 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128301417222 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499641488641 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400829381043 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742388061043 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124094933513 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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