In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies? Do you consider it good or bad?
It is very well observed that pursuing a career in athletics or entertainment are paid way more in comparison to White Collar servants like nurses faculties and clinicians. There are many social reasons backing this phenomena which is certainly not appreciable. The following composition pens few reasons for the respective cause and justifies my view for the same.
Primary one of the major reasons behind people like actors, fashion studies and cricketers receiving more money is there attractive and glamorous professional experiences. This, dramatically boosts their favouritism in the market which eventually leads to encourage such personalities to charge more for being popular among people. According to a recent news regarding film industries, it was surprisingly advocated that in last decade the amount of money being checked out to film stars have had drastically grown to 6 times more than it used to be before 10 years. These figures are not at equity to the payments received by any professional belonging to Healthcare or education sector.
Secondly, another key factor contributing to the respective concern is the media that rarely helps glorify serving professionals like Healthcare practitioners or knowledge grantors like teachers in order to boost their TRP. This results in low Staging of such workers on various sources of public exposure life television and mobile phones. This, however impacts their name and thus gains comparatively less fame.
In spite of these being the facts, the value for professionals other than sports and entertainment cannot be under-weighted. Many people like faculties and doctors play a vital role in contributing to the society. Therefore, according to the current scenario it is a definite injustice to them as they are equally liable for greater appreciation and pocketing high returns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47038327526 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03750428383 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655052264808 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.994263642 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175710372995 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566373836751 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402823493566 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976180642092 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160160128561 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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