The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The notion that raising the petrol price can alleviate environmental issues has been gaining traction. From my point of view, while this solution can help tackle environmental problems to a degree, this is not the most optimal solution as creating environmental social awareness would be a more effective approach.
On the one hand, it is crystal clear that exploiting and using fossil fuels lead to the air pollution problem so decreasing the demand for this kind of energy by increasing the price could lessen the amount of exhausted fume. Indeed, once the cost per transportation kilometer soars, people would look for another cost-saving means of transport or decrease their time on the road. For instance, in the year 2022, fuel costs busted out worldwide when the economy recovered after the COVID-19 pandemic, during that time, many people transitioned to riding bikes or using public transportation while other groups of people chose online work. In addition, the increase in fuel costs fosters humans into using alternative energy and inventing energy-saving machines, devices, or vehicles. To illustrate, in Vietnam electric vehicles produced by Vinfast Corporation have become more and more preferable resting on state-of-the-art functions that are not inferior to normal motorbikes or cars.
However, I still opine that an increase in fuel prices can only solve a limited part of the complex environmental issues and a global awareness campaign is the most feasible option. To be more specific, the causes of pollution are diverse, involving the use of plastic bags in shopping or chemicals used in both agriculture and industry which contaminate air, water, and land. Therefore, the most effective solution would be running a worldwide campaign that raises consumer awareness about the environmental cost of their shopping habits and presses companies to reduce the consumption of noxious chemicals and resolve to greener cultivating and manufacturing methods. For example, if governments apply a lower tax on companies that leave less impact on their surroundings, enterprises will proactively find ways to reduce their carbon footprint. Besides, in terms of individual consumption, more environmentally friendly shopping habits, such as using fabric bags, should be educated and spread out among consumers through purchase incentives and marketing campaigns.
In conclusion, it is justifiable to say that increasing the price of fuel partly addresses air pollution. However, I suppose that it is not the best resolution for complicated environmental issues that demand a comprehensive global campaign to convey messages and education so that each individual and group can consciously protect the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62469733656 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10021172243 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598062953995 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6385441148 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.928571429 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171276683197 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581369992698 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365202815059 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102833298884 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016622897919 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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