Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
To survive in the world earning is indispensable for every persons and that earning should fulfil all basic need of an individual. According to me though money is primary necessity of life but it should be enough, expecting big wages should not be the fundamental criteria of job satisfaction.
Ofcourse everyone's expectations are high salary, so along with their basic needs people can fulfil their secondary wishes also. with the help of big salary one can come true all their dreams, buy their own house and car. they can educate their children in highrise schools for higher degrees as well as provide all facilities for their easy going life. person can save money for his later life which will help them to live health and satisfactory life in old age and make them independent in their later life. Furthermore, with big money person can earn higher status in the society and respect as now a days money is one of the status Symbole in living society.
On the other hand, firstly, the big amount of cash also brings mental tension along with. Some people never satisfied with whatever they earn. Despite of having fullest bank balance they need more and more which make they more greedy. To earn more they choose wrong path like smuglling and drug related businesses. Secondarily, higher standard living also brings ego and greediness which destroys person's original personality.
In conclusion, though big salary has many positive aspects, i believe expectation of high wedges should not be the primary criteria of jobsatisfaction as more money always make person mentally disturbed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: Person
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: to wrong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55095005619 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4289113881 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848727796534 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329832999628 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319940348791 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585820686386 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207665697303 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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