In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the population of developed countries have grown elder or lived longer, more old people are looked after in the aged care homes to service them properly. However, There has been a matter of conflict whether families should spend on the holding expenses in these place or government. In the following, some aspects of the views are taken into account.
It is true that families are in the first priority to pay the care expenses or even look after their old parents. Undoubtedly, parents make an effort to obtain/afford/ all the children's expenses from the infancy to the young. In fact, parents dominantly devote most of the life and time to their children to grow up and get independent. Thus , children are responsible for returning their parents favors when they no longer work or do their daily routine activities./ daily routines /
Otherwise, governments should support the aged group people, especially by regard to this fact that the families cannot cover all the ordinary costs. In regard to the productivity and contribution of the elderly in the young period, governments ought to /should/ pay the care expenses in returns. It is coupled with the fact that people usually pay a tax which is the obligatory part of living cost in the most developed countries. therefore, governments are expected to invest a portion of the money in the aged care houses or related expenses. Another argument is that the amount of money paid for the insurances in the young ages should be used to cover the future plights such as aging diseases and care expenses.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments that old parents be surely supported by their family; however, government also should take charge of this duty because of paying tax and collaboration in the younger ages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d on the holding expenses in these place or government. In the following, some as...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ren to grow up and get independent. Thus , children are responsible for returning ...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly routine activities./ daily routines / Otherwise, governments should support th...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the young period, governments ought to /should/ pay the care expenses in return...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...g cost in the most developed countries. therefore, governments are expected to invest a p...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and collaboration in the younger ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in regard to, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00336700337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7136423844 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1164420223 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319423636905 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103498391498 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738197644514 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17114242095 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336874159593 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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