Buying things on the Internet, such as book, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh this disadvantages?
With the developing of technology, people use internet seem as the method which help them feel more convenient. In this way, online shopping is becoming well-liked. and it brings a number of benefit and harm.
shopping on the internet has some negative impacts. Firstly, you cannot tough or see the products. you may see the image describe the product and place an order, so checking or seeing are not happen before you received it. Therefore, if this product has mistake, you will not feel happy and waste money for this. In addition, this make people confused since there are a great number of shops on the internet. For example, I want to buy a T-shirt, when I search it on the website online shopping, many shops have it and same image. However, the price of T-shirt is different, so I demur to choose shop. consequently, I cannot wear T-shirt because it is too short.
On the other hand, I am on of the opinion that buying things on the internet brings people some benefits. Initially, shopping on the internet provide home delivery service, it helps people save a great deal of time. Especially. women have just give a birth or pregnant should stay at home and have time for children. Secondly, it as a tool help companies promote and provide products for customers through websites of shopping. From this, the cost of distributing leaflets, advertise on TV also reduces significantly. As a result of this, it creates shopping system completely and contributes to develop economic from another side. online shopping not only has some advantages above but also help people who need a work to start up. they cannot need a lots source of capital, they can take part in job market such as online shopping system, part time job. because of high demand of buying things online, the proportion of job may increases from simple work.
To conclusion, benefits of buying things on th internet more than disadvantages, so developing online shopping website is another way to help improve the quality of life and also help people to find out the job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...online shopping is becoming well-liked. and it brings a number of benefit and harm....
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shopping
...t brings a number of benefit and harm. shopping on the internet has some negative impac...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
..., you cannot tough or see the products. you may see the image describe the product ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...an order, so checking or seeing are not happen before you received it. Therefore, if t...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'mistaken'.
Suggestion: mistaken
...ived it. Therefore, if this product has mistake, you will not feel happy and waste mone...
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Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to shop'
Suggestion: to shop
...hirt is different, so I demur to choose shop. consequently, I cannot wear T-shirt be...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...s different, so I demur to choose shop. consequently, I cannot wear T-shirt because it is to...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
... save a great deal of time. Especially. women have just give a birth or pregnant shou...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Online
... to develop economic from another side. online shopping not only has some advantages a...
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Line 3, column 842, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... market such as online shopping system, part time job. because of high demand of buying t...
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Line 3, column 857, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
... online shopping system, part time job. because of high demand of buying things online,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80736543909 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59201071161 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.291588076 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8095238095 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239048596334 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700605752655 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636370954255 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159239076621 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270146157371 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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