Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.

Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, the consumption of online products is gradually increasing day by day, although the prize is more or less. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why online shopping is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.

Let's begin by looking at the advantages of internet shopping. The first is the rising of discounts, which means offering cash back or offers on the products. In other words, whereas 10 years ago, the average family has around 50$ per month to spend on groceries and households, now the figure has dropped to 35$ and so the idea of buying something and consumption is remarkable. On the other hand, the second is ample of products, which means an abundance of choices. For instance, before the independence of India there are only a few companies for every product, then after multinational companies have arrived and now there are many unknown products.

Turning to the other side of the argument, by this online consumption, the folks who are having shops are been effected. On the behalf, the local products are safer than online. For instance, whereas 10 years ago the consumption of products from the shopkeeper is more than now. On the other hand, people are becoming more lazy and clumsy, which causes many health problems. For instance, recent research has concluded that 30% of the individuals are affected by medical issues in u.k

all things considered, personally I think there are more pros than cons in online shopping. Although it has disadvantages it takes our country to the next level of evolution

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so, then, whereas, for instance, i think, in other words, more or less, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90287769784 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6509912815 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571942446043 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6712528138 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3571428571 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159739229647 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049840442548 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379736141048 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097209955996 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365390388143 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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