Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays by rising users of the internet, people prefer to buy their requirement online. In spite of all positive points which online buying has, there are some negative points about it. In my idea advantages can cover disadvantages.
Online sales have been really useful for modest people in recent years by facilitating shopping. It has been said that time is a kind of gold, so people pay attention more and more to time and they do all to save time. To catch this goal, omitting additional acts is necessary. Since it is a fact that everyone should spend a great deal of time for buying what they need, it is one of the duties that should delete for preventing waste of time. Moreover, there is another benefit that has been offered by online markets. These days a wide variety of products is considerable, so having a mean which can help a person to find their ideal stuff is really useful and this beneficial mean is possible by surfing on the net. By using the internet, searching tools are available for every one and some results from all over the world are given to them which can be really great to find and buy products.
However online buying has many advantages, some people do not use it as common as others. The point that buying a thing without test and check is risky, has made some people to ignore its benefits. They prefer to buy their needs by their own.
To sum up, online markets have changed lots of things and have helped people to save their time and energy to use them in a better way. Considering all points about this process, it is a fact that advantages overweigh and it can be absolutely useful for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, really, so, kind of, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54208754209 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34858561506 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6052313823 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133175391069 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464606668187 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304805939382 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859031762891 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0060468617204 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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