Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do you advantage of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people access the internet, as a way to serve their life. In my opinion, I completely agree that buying goods on the internet will be the advantage to prevail in the disadvantages.
Firstly, Almost all countries across the world that have strong about technology. As a result, some firms, especially are online companies they usually use the social network as a tool to show their products, such as books, air tickets, and groceries. For instance, many youngsters frequently reserve their air tickets on companies airline websites like VietJet, Vietnam Airline, etc... for their travel. Secondly, the payment method is extremely simple and rapid. Only your laptop and phone have connected to the network, you can instantly select and pay the items which you like to just double clicks. Moreover, the price tags are attached to the products which help to compare the product's value as well as quality. therefore, you can save plenty of time and money.
The main drawback' this trend is that dishonest. Firms could update their goods are gorgeous goods and the prices are so cheap. However, when your items are delivered, you will recognize that its quality did not deserve your property. Even if, the hacker can collect your personal information from unreality websites. It is so dangerous for you and your own family. I highlight you that should careful and avoid it as soon as possible.
Inclusion, although, purchasing online has a lot of risks, I totally agree that advantage weighted disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 720, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... the products value as well as quality. therefore, you can save plenty of time and money....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14859437751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61256632729 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654618473896 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7116033676 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4117647059 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133432755091 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356345732856 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314858292978 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747703026855 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357859397147 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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