Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ' one big traffic jams '
How true do you think this statement is ?
What mearsures can goverments take to discourage people from using their cars ?
With my opinion and living in Vietnam many years, the traffic jam is one of the famous specialties. With the population now was seven billion people in the world. So the traffic jam is also caught in many countries like in Vietnam, China, India and more…. So what the government should do? This is a hard question because people used vehicles are the main way to move. If we have the best condition or we have a capital, we should improve the public transports like bus, subway or rent a bike. Not only does reduce the traffic jam, it is also help keep the enviroment clean and less canxi carbonate. Another solutions are tax the car or motorbike. So people will used the public transports instead for another vehicles. One important thing is the government should rebuild all the street, traffic light, CCTV and facilitate for cyclists or pedestrians. I hope that ways will help many countries apply for their country and the traffic jam will be not a problem in their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...does reduce the traffic jam, it is also help keep the enviroment clean and less canx...
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Line 1, column 664, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ax the car or motorbike. So people will used the public transports instead for anoth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68208092486 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47089374809 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606936416185 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3595517762 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6363636364 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197852630501 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767768975931 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372130831537 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197852630501 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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