Many countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors to take part in major sports competitions such as the Olympics, football world cup etc. Some people think that it would be better to spend this money to encourage children to take part in sports in a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
with my opinion about this problem, I agree about the country that was spend a lot of money preparing competitors to take part in major sport competitions because they are famous traditional with a plenty of fans. So maybe it will encourage people who love sport play sport with their ambition. Some people will think if we spend a lot of money to the major sport was very wasted. The answer is no – let’s think clearly about this situation. If we didn’t spent a lot of money or invest that match then do you think it completely perfect and don’t have any gap? If yes, people will care about that match and that match will make people have passionate whereas if no, people will see that match in different way – the bad way contemporary we can not acquired anything better about it. You can not order what you want or compulsory another people do. All the success must have a process, have passionate, love and show our passion to everyone see. The important thing here is the organisation should advertisement and strength invest one topic of sport or the match. So I think I will support the first ideal because it is a prospects I think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: With
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Message: Did you mean 'perfects'?
Suggestion: perfects
...t match then do you think it completely perfect and don't have any gap? If yes, pe...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'acquire'
Suggestion: acquire
...y – the bad way contemporary we can not acquired anything better about it. You can not o...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a prospect' or simply 'prospects'?
Suggestion: a prospect; prospects
...l support the first ideal because it is a prospects I think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51798266205 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0980943409 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27556917128 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107838449633 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111562379163 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27556917128 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.