you have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, nou you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to manager of the ogranisation where you have been working.

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you have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, nou you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to manager of the ogranisation where you have been working.

Dear Alex
My name is Lucas and I have been work for my local community about one year. I very love this activity because it’s make me feel very happy and maybe help me to reviced my habit. Not only is make me have a experience, it’s also help me to learn new languages and change my mind about “voluntary work”.
But now, I can not do voluntary work like before I was did. Because I have to move to another state to work. My company was changed the address to another state so I can not do vonluntary work. I work for ABC company. This company do all documents about the scienetific gene. It’s like do a report about biology. I really want do the voluntary work but you know I must have to move with my company because it’s one of my favorite job ever.
Maybe I can not do vonluntary work in my local community but I will continues do voluntary work in different local community. I very sad and miss my local community and all groups that help me to the first day I was came to this activity.
I will call all my friends living in this local to join the voluntary work. I will write a status to call all people who have free time to join too.
I will comeback soon if I have my free time and I had done all my job to work with all of you.
I hope you read and reply my letter
Thank you so much

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iced my habit. Not only is make me have a experience, it's also help me to l...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...not do voluntary work like before I was did. Because I have to move to another stat...
^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o voluntary work like before I was did. Because I have to move to another state to work...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...k. I work for ABC company. This company do all documents about the scienetific gen...
^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...y work in my local community but I will continues do voluntary work in different local co...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...ups that help me to the first day I was came to this activity. I will call all my f...
^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... this local to join the voluntary work. I will write a status to call all people ...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...people who have free time to join too. I will comeback soon if I have my free ti...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ne all my job to work with all of you. I hope you read and reply my letter Than...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15444015444 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37731887347 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451737451737 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9070067577 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322759811553 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124730971789 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634110134103 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17172392105 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550073658792 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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