Training for bring up kids is quite necessary for those who are getting into parenthood newly. I completely agree with this point of view and the reasons for my agreement will be discussed in the following paragraph.
Undergoing a parenthood training helps parents understand the importance of positively motivating and supporting their children at each stages of growth and development. It is observed that, nowadays, many parents are so heavily occupied with works that they don't have time to spend with their offsprings. As a result , they end up not satisfying their children's desire of love. Moreover, they are not aware of their parental responsibilities. To explain further, taking part in a parenting course could rightly provide parents with suitable skills to support and motivate their beloved ones whenever they are in need of parent support and guidance .
Participating in a parent course makes parents become the models of their children. For example, children of a conflicting parents would be always depressed, stressdul, and even afraid of that parents would come down on them. If they join in parents training, it would help them to identify the weakness of their way of education and gradually improve their mutual love and acceptance. Hence, their children also start to learn the basics of love , respect and other appreciate qualities. Moreover, their kids will be more satisfied and proud of their parents always.
From these reasons above mentioned the conclusion can be drawn that the idea of new parent training is quite necessary. Because it can aid parents to be the real supporters and models of their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o heavily occupied with works that they dont have time to spend with their offspring...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...spend with their offsprings. As a result , they end up not satisfying their childr...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e in need of parent support and guidance . Participating in a parent course mak...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'parent'?
Suggestion: parent
... For example, children of a conflicting parents would be always depressed, stressdul, a...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would always be
...mple, children of a conflicting parents would be always depressed, stressdul, and even afraid o...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n also start to learn the basics of love , respect and other appreciate qualities....
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...re satisfied and proud of their parents always. From these reasons above mentioned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77879374876 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3439928007 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208726649815 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839027289281 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535998876432 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138839547987 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223978116253 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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